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I feel insulted.

I have no idea why you would submit this project in it's current form.

Negatives -
Animation was rubbish.

Backgrounds were poorly drawn.

Some scenes lasted minutes longer than they were supposed to, and weren't even necessary to the film.

Story was a series of nonsensical disjointed text balloons.

Positives -

After almost closing the flash twice because it was seemingly unfinished and would just pause inexplicably, it managed to drag itself on.

At one point you had music.

Try harder next time and please don't submit half-assed work.

Uh oh

But now you have at least 350 views, which means you've gone into the black for time stealing. Now something equally as terrible as the Watchmen is going to have to occupy you to piss your time away.

Vicious cycle eh?

Well.

I'm sure it's a great inside joke, but why in the blazes did you post it on here?

None of us know you, or care (wow that sounds harsh, but you provoked it :/).

Keep it on your guilds forum or something, it's just bound to draw intense criticism here.

Lold

Funny game, but man were the controls clunky. Took a long time to adjust to the platforming in getting all the trophies, and even then, it was still frustrating.

Also, nice Demon's Souls reference in there.

Nice

I liked it as a whole, but was a bit disappointed when some artists just kind of broke the "worm" into drawing something that took nothing from the previous picture.

Other than that, I thought it was an awesome idea. Great job.

Talking to the chick

"That's the direction he 'was' headed in" is how it should read. Just saying, since it is a game about grammar and all.

Anyway, it was a fun game, although a couple of the descriptions might need to be further simplified. The one example I can think of was the defining tranquil screen, as you define tranquil as serene. I'm pretty sure serene is a less common word than tranquil, so using that route to explain the word was kind of confusing. Also, ingenious needs to be defined by brilliant, and not brilliance.

The only other suggestion I can think of is when you're hunting down the pyro in the woods. Maybe you could have some way of tracking how many words you defined correctly throughout the game and based on how well you did you could have hints at this part for his location. I only say this because this part just seems like a waste of time through trial and error, and doesn't really mesh well with the rest of the game.

It was a cool change of pace game though, and I really enjoyed the music. Hope you get a good grade on it :)